五年级英语作文及点评：In The Kitchen

 　　In The Kitchen

　　This is the kitchen of my family. It’s big and nice. Look! My mother is cooking in it. This is a microwave and that is a stove. There is a big table here. There are many things on it. What are these? They look yummy! Oh, they’re strawberries. And what are those? They are grapes.

　　【要领点评】

　　这篇作文的题目是“在厨房”里，作者根据自己家的厨房情况。介绍厨房里有微波炉和电炉，有一张大桌子和桌子上的物品等，以及妈妈在做饭，非常真实。

　　小朋友们，可以从观察自己身边的事、物写起，利用所学的句子，描述身边熟悉的东西来训练习作。